None of you are buying that, huh? All right, I confess. I'm over the moon ecstatic! So, while we wait, here is a little treat for you. The one line in the story which has drawn the most positive comments from my critique partners and beta readers:
“Animi.” His voice was rough as he dipped his head closer. “If you fall asleep, then I will need to reevaluate my technique.”
See you all on Thursday!